Some people work for the same organisation all their working life.Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Employment is an important part of adult life. a full time working employee spends up to forty hours in the place of work, so
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of work plays a significant impact on mental well being and happiness. Working for the same employer for the entire life is followed by a few people,
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earns trust and is considered loyal. Owners start recognising and identify him as a familiar person entrusting him confidential jobs.
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increases the chance of promotions and serves as a faster way of career growth.
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makes it possible to stay working past regular retirement age like
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own centre after retirement and long term connections help in the client base. Few others contradict with the idea of
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single company employment and propose that working in many centres is the best.
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is because each employer has a specific working style. Working with them is an opportunity to learn. So changing centres is a method of learning new things and building scope in a resume. later ,
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when an own company is established, success follows in a short time span. The main lapse is future placements are difficult as the subtle impression is that the person is not reliable and trustworthy. I always believed that working in the same place is easy, friendly, trusty, convenient and a better way of career build
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I agree with the opinion that working in the same organisation is better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Longevity
  • Corporate ladder
  • Adaptability
  • Comfort zone
  • Professional network
  • Diverse skill set
  • Industry exposure
  • Innovation
  • Resilience
  • Seniority
  • Job market
  • Career trajectory
  • Company culture
  • Professional growth
  • Job security
  • Promotion prospects
  • Cross-functional experience
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