Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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congestion and

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problems

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are now one of the world’s most worrisome issues.

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I agree that making the

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of fossil fuel more expensive is one of the solutions to combat

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, I do not believe that it is the best. On the one hand, increasing the

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of

petrol

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undoubtedly encourage drivers to be more conscious of the amount of fuel they use. Some might even put effort into finding alternative ways of transportations.

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might prefer to walk to their destinations rather than driving.

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, expensive

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means drivers from

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affluents

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might not be able to afford it.

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, the number of private cars on roads will be reduced as well as

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and

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problems

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.

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, despite the benefits mentioned above, I believe that providing sufficient education to citizens is far more effective than increasing the

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of

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. The main drawback with making

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more expensive is it will be effective only with particular groups of

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as those from

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economic

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.

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education,

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, will help

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to understand causes and solutions for the

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as well as raising their awareness towards the issues at the same time.

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, it

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efficiently work for most

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regardless

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financial backgrounds.

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, the best and most practical method to solve

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and

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problems

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is improving public transportations.

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expensive fossil fuels

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to the reduction

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number of private car users, it

is

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means the

price

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of goods and products will increase.

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, making public transports more convenient, reliable and efficient will encourage

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to turn away from using private cars and result in fewer cars on roads. In short, while I agree that increasing the

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of

petrol

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can be

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way to deal with

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and

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problems

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, I still believe that providing good education, or improving public transportations is better.