Nowadays not enough students choose science subjects in universities in many countries .What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

Present days fewer
students
select
science
subjects
in universities in
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of nations. I believe that reason for
this
is its more complex and
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to study and hard to get good results. Possible causes in
this
regard are more opportunities in
science
field
might get vacant in society. It is argued that
university
undergraduates are more reluctant to educate
science
modules in their tertiary level of education.
This
is because
,
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it comprises
vast
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field
of
studying
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and more practicals need to be done at laboratories to prove theories they learn.
In addition
, more
students
are unable to get their desired scores due to having lack of practical knowledge.
For example
, in India, most
of
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university
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students
give up
science
subjects
to agricultural
subjects
in the
first
year as a
results
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of failure of required results to enter into the
second
year.
On the other hand
,
negative
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consequences
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of having
small
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number of
students
opt to follow specialised
science
modules in
university
is
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that less interest
of
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providing service in the
filed
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field
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is unable to satisfy
demand
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the demand
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of career prospects in
science
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field
which will significantly increase in society. In order to fulfil job vacancies in biological sciences, more youngers need to be trained by encouraging them to choose biological
subjects
from the beginning of their cause in
university
.
For instance
, in Bangladesh, many
university
science
graduates are teachers in government schools due to failure of being learned in
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science
course
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. In conclusion, despite, difficulties of learning the wide area of
science
subjects
,
students
should be more motivated to focus on
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area
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which
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more career opportunities are available and it will be useful to engage in a job in
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field
of
gratuated
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graduated
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Lack of interest
  • Motivation
  • Perceived difficulty
  • Career guidance
  • Diverse opportunities
  • Social media influence
  • Trendy fields
  • Outdated curriculum
  • Modern relevance
  • Engagement
  • Technological advancement
  • Economic growth
  • Public health
  • Innovation
  • Sustainability
  • Skilled workforce
  • Knowledge economy
  • Research and development
  • Scientific literacy
  • Global competitiveness
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