Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Recently,
wastage
is the main
concerned
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for the government to get rid of it. Due to the fact that accessive usage of
plastic
and chemical companies' lethargic behaviour
rubbish
is increasing day by day and it can be eliminated by the government's strict rules. One main cause of the
wastage
is that
,
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people
are using more and more
plastic
instead
of paper bags or reusable cloth bags for daily use.
For instance
, when you go to buy some groceries,
vendor
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the vendor
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packs all the
stuffs
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stuff
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in a
plastic
bag and you
thow
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throw
it out once you reach home.
Moreover
, chemical companies, who throw their
wastage
either in
open
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area or to the sea which produces more
rubbish
.
People
are not well aware of the fact that the way they are throwing
rubbish
,
it
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is only
goin
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going
to affect ourselves only in the future. To eliminate the situation, the
governement
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government
should start
the
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strict action.
For example
, by introducing rules for common
people
that they should not use
plastic
bags for daily
shoppig
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shopping
or strict warning to these chemical companies to follow the proper
protocals
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protocols
to get rid of their
comapny's
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company's
wastage
. There should be a recycling process to make the
rubbish
resusable
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reusable
like
plastic
bottles. One should get a fine if the individual or a company is not following the regulations to make the
surrounding
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clean and tidy. So in my opinion, to keep the environment clean and healthy,
government
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the government
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should initiate
the
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programs to make
the
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people
aware
about
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how to keep our mother earth garbage free.
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  • consumerism
  • sustainability
  • landfill
  • recycle
  • single-use products
  • waste management
  • regulatory measures
  • composting
  • biodegradable
  • environmental impact
  • incentives
  • sustainable practices
  • circular economy
  • zero waste
  • responsibility
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