Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online and give your opinion.

Technology has been flourishing by leaps in every area of life, and shopping is not an exception. We can buy anything with a few mouse clicks in the comfort home, and they provide an easy way to

payment

,

however

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it can be impulsive buying . There are

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myriad benefits associated with shopping online.

Firstly

, accessibility to buy products which can not be found in the nearest store. People can reach anything without physically going, they can

shopping

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shop

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at home, which

lead

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to saving precious time.

Moreover

, online platforms support multiple

payment

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payments

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such

, give people the convenience to buy. To illustrate

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, in 2021 the users of Tokopedia, one of the leading application

store

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stores

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in Indonesia, increasing more

significantly

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up to 30%. Consumers of Korean fashion

product

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products

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are the most buyer. They can buy Korean clothes without having to go

South

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Korea. Tokopedia

also

provide

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BNPL (Buy Now Pay Later) , so that the consumer which does not have money can pay it

in

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another time. Admittedly,

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hedonic shopping is

undesirable

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an undesirable

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consequence of e-commerce’s buyers.

Customer

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The customer

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has a tendency to buy goods and services without planning in advance, cause an overspending and

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rising debts. E-commerce growth followed by the

increasing

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increase

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of digital

payment

has encouraged the penetration of

payment

features that aims to attract

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consumers. The current phenomenon in Indonesia is the existence of pay later features. Pay later system requires a minimum purchase of

certain

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amount , make them buy the higher price and unnecessary products.

However

,

this

digital

payment

feature has unexpected outcomes

charactarized

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characterized

characterised

by increased default. To sum up, buying something on the internet can reduce the mobilization , save time, and has many

option

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to pay , in spite of

hedonic

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the hedonic

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character of buyers.