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Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

#landlord #furniture #action
Dear Mr. Aseem, I am writing
this
 letter to bring your attention to the problem we are having with the
furniture
. I am Brijal, one of the tenants from Al
khail
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 Heights 1-14B 703. I have just moved in
last
 week with my family. I really appreciate that you provided us
the
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 house with
furniture
 in it.
However
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i
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I
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 would like to let know that the dining table and my kid's bed
is
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 not assembled properly.
Bed's
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The bed's
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 headrest was loose and it fell down,
fortunately
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fortunately,
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 my son was playing
out side
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outside
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 so no one got injured.
Same
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The same
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 might happened with the dining table
also
 as
chairs
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 are wanky and not able to use them. I would be
a
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grateful
,
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 if
you
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you
can
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 have a look and bring a
maintanance
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maintenance
 person to
fixed
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 it or else if you have another set of
these
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this furniture
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furniture
 to exchange with our existing one. Whatever option is suitable for you. Awaiting for your response. Thank you! Yours faithfully, Brijal
DesaiWrite
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Desai Write
 a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the
furniture
 say what action you would like the landlord to take
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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