Do you agree or disagree because of more and more young people are studying and working overseas, this will bring greater international cooperation in the future?

It's believed that students who got an education and worked abroad, will make it possible to collaborate better between different countries. From my point of view,
this
thesis is quite practical and there are some reasons why.
Firstly
, education or work process means that men will definitely spend some time living in a foreign country.
This
leads to understanding residents' traditions and
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, customs and specific attitudes to life and other important things.
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,
these knowledge
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will help in future cooperation between colleagues, companies and even countries.
Secondly
, youngsters will share their
experience
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with citizens. Some people, who have never been abroad, will have a chance to see and hear from the
first
hand about
foreign
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way of living, eating and communicating. At
last
, people are social creatures and they
are tend
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to make friends, start families and etc. There is
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research,made by MIT in 2010, showed that bilingual children can more easily make friends, they
also
can be polyglots, and they are more empathetic. These are the perfect characteristics for professions in international relations, politics and other foreign activities. To sum up, students who studied and worked abroad will obviously bring
benifits
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in future to their homeland and a current country where they lived or going to live
further
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