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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

#exercise #children #teenagers #education #sport #students #schools
It is widely known that exercises are essential for human’s
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 and mood. And
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 necessary to include physical education as a part of
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 process in all schools. I personally think that I rather agree with that, but a few exceptions, which I describe later. Why physical
activities
 are important? Well, as mentioned before,
sport
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 and mood. It helps our body to stay in shape, keeps our musculature developed and inner metabolism in
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 is sustained
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 a stable manner, without fat deposits. The
next
 reason why training is important – that healthy people will be more active and have a good endurance to struggle with depression /or diseases. On other hand, some students, well, might have sort of physical disabilities or problems with heart
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 example, and
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 they should have training plans specially designed for them.
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, some schools can simply expel
sport
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this
 kind of students.
Furthermore
,
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activities
 require some special equipment like
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 playground with
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 for football/basketball, skies in case of alpine skiing during winter,
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 pool,
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 and so on. At
last
, but not least physical education teacher must be very qualified,
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 he must know how to give
first
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trainings
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 without risks/or make them lower.
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most
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schools have
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 environment and teachers and a lot of children enjoy
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activities
, especially
activities
 with teams. So, physical education is very important and vital for teenagers, even with some exceptions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • physical health
  • mental health
  • compulsory
  • instill
  • regular exercise
  • participation
  • teamwork
  • discipline
  • resilience
  • academic studies
  • concentration
  • focus
  • childhood obesity
  • motor skills
  • coordination
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