Some people think that hosting an international sport events is good for the country why some people think it is that discuss both views and state your opinion

People have different views about becoming a
country
host
for an international
sprots
Correct your spelling
sports
event. While there are some existing drawbacks of being a
country
host
, I would argue that it does bring more
benefits
to the
country
hosting for
an
Change the article
a
show examples
world-wide
Correct your spelling
worldwide
show examples
sport event. On the one hand, there are reasons why hosting an international
sports
event is bad.
First
, since it costs from millions to
billions
Add the preposition
ofbillions
show examples
dollars to build
sports
facilities
that
suitable
Add a missing verb
are suitable
show examples
for the standards of international competitions, it would cause financial burdens on a national budget.
This
leads to the postpone of other crucial projects
such
as schools or electricity in distant areas
because
Add the preposition
ofbecause
show examples
the lack of
capitals
Fix the agreement mistake
capital
show examples
.
Second
, the
benefits
that
brings
Change the verb form
bring
show examples
from international
sports
events might
under
Add a missing verb
be under
show examples
expectations
Correct article usage
the expectations
show examples
of
host
Add an article
the host
a host
show examples
.
For example
, due to the coronavirus pandemic, Japan which used to
proud
Add a missing verb
be proud
show examples
to become the
country
host
of Olympic 2019 could not gain the
benefits
from
Fix the agreement mistake
tourism
show examples
tourisms
Correct your spelling
tourism
show examples
.
On the other hand
,
host
Add an article
the host
show examples
country
for global
sports
games would gain
a great deal of
Change the quantifier
a lot of
many
plenty of
show examples
benefits
.
First
, because the
country
host
would have
accesses
Fix the agreement mistake
access
show examples
to financial supports from international
organization
Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
show examples
to build
facilities
used for the game, the
country
could change the national
sports
facilities
when the
country
takes advantage of it.
Therefore
, not only
sports
facilities
but
also
public construction infrastructure would be improved.
Second
, probably nothing better
to
Change preposition
than to
show examples
advertise the name and the beauty of a
country
to gain the advantage of tourism when it becomes the
host
of a game that gain the notice of the world. People could visit the
host
country
thanks to its
reputations
Fix the agreement mistake
reputation
show examples
from
Change preposition
at
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
international
sports
events or to support the competition, which leads to a surge in tourists. In conclusion, some countries possibly
faces
Change the verb form
face
show examples
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
difficulties
from
Change preposition
of
show examples
becoming a
host
of
an
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
show examples
international
sports
even, others could take advantage of
this
opportunity to develop and advertise the
country
.
Submitted by kimngocngocttdpt on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: