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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in team, while other people think that take part in individual sports is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #part #sports #team
Nowadays, there is a huge amount of
individualities
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 who
keen
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are keen
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 on
sport
.
Accordingly
, almost everyone who decides on what kind of
sports
 he or she will spend all the free time faces a choice one of two large categories of all types of
sports
. People can decide to take part in
individual
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sport
, like boxing, tennis or even horse riding. At the same time, there
USA
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 vast range of diversity of team
sports
,
such
 as
backer
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a backer
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 ball or volleyball.
Therefore
, all persons who
involved
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 in
sport
 are divided into two groups. Both these views are presented in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, it is important to notice that individual
sports
 are useful for concentration.
Moreover
, there are more benefits for children and teenagers. Running, boxing or even chess and other kinds of
sports
 in which a person plays alone can prepare young people for their adult life.
Such
 extra-curricular activities show that everyone should rely only on themselves.
However
, it can provide issues with communication.
On the contrary
, all
sports
 that require playing in teams often lead to arguments between players.
Such
 situations can be especially stressful for teenagers
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whose
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who's
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whose
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 mentality is not robust enough. Though, many studies of psychologists show that children who are fascinated about team kinds of
sports
 have
less
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fewer
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 problems with anger and communication in their
further
 life. In conclusion, it is crucial to say that any
sport
 should be suitable for the person.
Accordingly
, it means that the most essential thing is the child's comfort and pleasure.
Therefore
, the kind of
sport
 should be chosen taking into account the child's features. Only in
this
 case
sport
 will give any benefits.
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