You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter: explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell say how much you would like to sell the item for
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter in relation to trade a very precious material that I possess with me at the moment. I found about your antique shop through one of my friend
, who has always bought stuff from your shop. When he came to know that I was planning to sell Fix the agreement mistake
friends
this
item, he suggested Change preposition
to me
me
your shop.
The item is a silver trumpet, Correct pronoun usage
apply
its
really ancient and have been with my family for about Replace the word
it's
it is
hundred
years. It is silverish in Correct article usage
a hundred
color
with its measurement being 18*20. It is quite heavy and big enough and I very well think that it would suit in some bigger place as compared to my small lounge. It is a kind of Change the spelling
colour
Correct your spelling
showpiece
show piece
, which has attracted most of the guests in my house.
I am planning to give it off for $300 though it costs more than $500. Correct your spelling
showpiece
This
historical piece was given to my ancestral family member by KochiRajavu, a king in state
of Kerala in 1800. I truly believe that Add an article
the state
this
would be of great use for you as compared to me. I have enclosed some of its pictures along with this
letter. Kindly go through it and get back to me on my number, given in the back of picture
. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Neethu BabuAdd an article
the picture
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