Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, there is a growing trend that
people
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tends to buy things on the Internet.
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has both advantages and disadvantages, but the advantages, in my opinion, outweigh the disadvantages. It could be seen that online shopping
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to
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a
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of practical benefits.
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, online shopping allows consumers to view products from many different stores. From there, they can easily compare the quality and cost of products on the market.
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brings great benefits to customers because they can make the best choice without thinking too much. In my experience, I have bought a
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of hair clips
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online shopping, and it helped me save a
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of money. I was able to choose a
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with a lower price
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and at the same
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the quality of the
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. The
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is
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rated very well.
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, shopping on the Internet saves
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a
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of
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. When we are too busy with work, we can still go shopping for ourselves. Home delivery service has become popular and extremely convenient. The
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can send goods to your home, saving a
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of
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for
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. Not only that, we can shop more safely when buying online, especially during the serious outbreak of Covid 19.
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,
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shopping brings consumers a number of disadvantages. The quality of the
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may not be guaranteed when it is not possible to check it before buying it.
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will cause some orders to be under-delivered or have production problems that the
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has unintentionally overlooked when packing the order.
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, if the buyer is not satisfied with the
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, but cannot return it.
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is definitely a waste of money, and we never know in advance whether our item is really
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or not.
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, if the shopper is not satisfied with the
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, but cannot return it.
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is definitely a waste of money.
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, shipping can
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take a long
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if your area is too far from the
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. Or your item may be damaged in transit if not handled carefully In conclusion, the problems of the e-commerce movement are outweighed by the advantages of contemporary technology. I am sure that internet buying is one of the most significant advancements in the way
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conduct business since it saves
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and gives more alternatives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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