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The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The process illustrates the preparation of
pizza
dough
.
First
 of all, the following ingredients should be ready: four cups or 500 grams of flour, a cup and a half or 325 grams of water,
two
 teaspoons of salt and
a
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apply
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half a teaspoon of active dry yeast to make
pizza
dough
.
Further
, when the ingredients are prepared, they are put in a mixer and
blent
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blend
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 for
two
 minutes at low speed. It is essential to stir all ingredients thoroughly. After, the
dough
need
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needs
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 to be mixed at medium speed and
then
 at low one again for five and
two
 minutes respectively. After all, when all these acts are done, the
pizza
dough
 should not be touched
at
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for at
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 least
two
 hours. In
this
 case, it can double in size because of yeast. The
last
two
 stages are
kniding
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knitting
 and finished the
dough
 and cutting it
in
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into
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 3 equal pieces with 275 grams in each. The
dough
 is willing to become a
pizza
.
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