You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter in connection with a day-long event organized at your hotel - "The Grand Tree", on 23rd march 2021. I would like to take
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opportunity to thank you for successfully hosting us, and express my concern over the quality of food provided, and what can you do in future to make it better?
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, I am happy to inform you that all our participants were happy with almost all the amenities. Whether it would be hygiene, wifi facility, space at lounge area and behaviour of your staff.
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, I am sorry to say, but when it comes to the quality of meat, it was not up to the mark what we were expecting. Since the
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was not baked properly, it was smelly and stingy.
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, candidates were find it difficult to chew, due to the hardness of the
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. Even though
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we requested staff members to replace it, they were not interested in resolving the issue. Unfortunately, participants left the
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without eating.
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, I have two recommendations that I want to share with you. You should have a proper internal quality control system in place like the controller should check the food before it serves on the table. Apart from
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, please request to your chef that he should start preparation of
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a little bit earlier so that it would be bake properly. I would like to thank you once again, and I hope you will find my suggestion constructive. Yours faithfully, Zubair Khan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compliments
  • Ambiance
  • Professionalism
  • Hospitality
  • Quality
  • Variety
  • Freshness
  • Catering
  • Menu options
  • Dietary requirements
  • Feedback
  • Survey
  • Collaboration
  • Improvements
  • Rectify
  • Gastronomy
  • Culinary
  • Hospitality industry
  • Client satisfaction
  • Constructive criticism
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