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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity . Do the advantage of this is outweigh the disadvantages

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Owing to the rise in the need for non-renewable sources of energy, in
this
 contemporary era, it has become essential to seek out other alternatives by drilling in far off places. While
this
 trend has demerits to some extent, I would argue that it is merits are more significant and pertinent notions will be explicated
further
. Commencing with pre-eminent positive aspects of
this
 assertion. The former viable anatomy is, less usage of oil and gas would lessen the pollution. To elaborate
it
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more, if the commoners begin to use more electric vehicles, air contamination will
dimish
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diminish
 to some extent, which has become a grave concern of today's world, and it not only impact the environment but
also
health
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 of inhabitants. In the USA, to exemplify, in 2009, electric cars were launched by
automobile
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the automobile
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 industry in the market, which
dimish
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diminish
 the 2% pollution.
Furthermore
, as drilling more areas for extraction of other resources, more
number of
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people are required, which eventually generate jobs for dwellers;
Therefore
, to protect the world from polluted environment, and to proliferate the job market,
driliing
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drilling
declining
 remote places has become
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. In
site
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 of having certain favourable aspects, the dark side of finding innovative methods for non-renewable resources, can not be overlooked. Since immense money is needed to build a plant for the development of electric cars, the government needs to invest
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plenty of finance on
this
,
however
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ministry can spend that money
in
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 the welfare of
the
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society.
For instance
, in the TOI article, the
governement
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government
 of India invest 2 million
of
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amount
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on
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the
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social works rather than creating electric cars.
Hence
, in terms of financial investment, launching new plants for other resources of
enengy
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energy
 would be a huge cost. In conclusion, albeit the monetary investment is higher to manufacture the plant, living in
unpolluted
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 atmosphere and reduce the confinements of unemployment are more fruitful for a healthy society.
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