During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. * remind him when and where you met * tell him what kind of job you are interested in * say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr Kooper,
I am Manpreet Kaur, and I am lucky enough to introduce myself to you a few days ago when we both were flying from Mohali to Bengaluru. We discussed various things including your
restaurant
business "The Taj".
It was very kind of you to advise me to think big of my career. And, you asked me to contact you if I need any job opportunities. I think you might have a suitable place for me. So, here I am sir, I would love to join your business if you have the position of head chef in your restaurant
.
For your kind consideration, I would like to explain that I have been working as a head chef in "Sagar Ratna". I was a fresher when I joined the job over there. Now, after acquiring five years of experience, I have learnt a variety of dishes. I am passionate about my work and your restaurant
would be a perfect platform for my career growth. Furthermore
, you would get young talent and it would be a win-win situation.
I would very much like to work in your restaurant
. I hope you would give me an opportunity to prove my worth.
Yours sincerely,
Manpreet Kaur.Submitted by manparliv on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite