Some people think that one world government is better than national governments. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed by some individuals that
instead
of different national wise authority
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authorities
one
ministry is beneficial for the world. There are both advantages and disadvantages of this
phenomenon. But the demerits surpass the merits. Both these will be discussed adequately in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, advantages of this
statements. The first
and foremost merit is the enhancement in accommodation. To explain it, small
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a small
region
that depend on imports from other Fix the agreement mistake
regions
community
for their essential items, they are benefited from Fix the agreement mistake
communities
this
type of system. For example
, the cost of food products and other items will decrease because of the less import duty. Secondly
, people can go anywhere for their business purposes around the globe due to the worldwide same authority.
On the other hand
, there are many demerits of this
statement. Firstly
, it is become very difficult to handle the earth with only one
system. To explain it, there are many
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much
society
around Change to a plural noun
societies
the
nature so, it becomes very hard to fulfil the requirements of all humankind around Correct article usage
apply
the
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one
political party. Moreover
, the maintainance
of equality with all people around the earth is a major problem for politics. Correct your spelling
maintenance
Furthermore
, distribution of funds. To explain it, because of a lot of land supply distribution is very difficult due to various types of currency and requirements of the capital.
To conclude, there are some pros of one
authority around the
nature but the cons of Correct article usage
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this
can not surpass the demerits. There are a lot of difficulties which
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be faced
one
ministry such
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