Some people think that one world government is better than national governments. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed by some individuals that
instead
of different national wise
authority
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only
one
ministry is beneficial for the world. There are both advantages and disadvantages of
this
phenomenon. But the demerits surpass the merits. Both these will be discussed adequately in the ensuing paragraphs. To commence with, advantages of
this
statements. The
first
and foremost merit is the enhancement in accommodation. To explain it,
small
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region
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regions
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that depend on imports from other
community
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for their essential items, they are benefited from
this
type of system.
For example
, the cost of food products and other items will decrease because of the less import duty.
Secondly
, people can go anywhere for their business purposes around the globe due to the worldwide same authority.
On the other hand
, there are many demerits of
this
statement.
Firstly
, it is become very difficult to handle the earth with only
one
system. To explain it, there are
many
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society
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around
the
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nature so, it becomes very hard to fulfil the requirements of all humankind around
the
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nature by only
one
political party.
Moreover
, the
maintainance
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maintenance
of equality with all people around the earth is a major problem for politics.
Furthermore
, distribution of funds. To explain it, because of a lot of land supply distribution is very difficult due to various types of currency and requirements of the capital. To conclude, there are some pros of
one
authority around
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nature but the cons of
this
can not surpass the demerits. There are a lot of difficulties
which
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can
be face
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by
one
ministry
such
as equality of people, foundation distribution and fulfilment of requirements of all the areas of the earth.
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