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Some people think exposure to modern technology at an earlier age is good for children, while others claim that it is harmful to their development. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In the contemporary era,
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 innovation has become
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 integral part of everybody
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. There are some people who believe that
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 modern devices have
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 impact on young children
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, whereas, there are others argue that, it
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 negative progress in their
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. In , the forthcoming passage, I will try to explain both sides of
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 and
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 give my point of view.
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 notion because the submission to the gadgets
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 learning progress. With the use of , computers , smartphones, Apple TV, i- pod is now incorporated into the educational lessons and
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 boost up interest, and help to engaged students with
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, the relation between teachers and pupils were become more comfortable due to hand devices as well as, students
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 doing multimedia projects which enhance their skills.
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, the world Education Form run a survey and reported that
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over
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70%
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 learning and practical skills are increased.
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,
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 creativity level increased in
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 stage of
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 helpful for their near future
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,
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, some individuals claim that
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 subjection towards automation machines has
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 because
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 it makes
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 generation lazier and
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 develop several contagious diseases. Nowadays, teenagers engaged most of their time on the screen .
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, they start to dislike physical tasks . For that reason, they are now less active comparing to the past people.
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, the world health organisation say that
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 50% of
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 were effective by obesity and depression ,
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, their obsession on new technology.
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, they become
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 and unsociable that makes them alone. To conclude, in my perception, it is
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 truth, the usefulness of modern machinery in our
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 is unimaginable.
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, we just need to be
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 cautious about using
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those facilities.
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