It is important for children to learn the different between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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It is undeniable that learning the difference
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between
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wrong at an early age is vital.
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I agree that punishing is essential to support
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in learning
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distinction, I think that it is not the only way to help
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contrast. On the one hand, physical punishment is a good method and helpful for
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to get a sense of
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. At an early age,
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are unable to decide the things or conditions which are really correct or not and they may
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make
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in some cases.
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, most of the
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are a full sense of curiosity about some items
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they don’t know how it is dangerous and
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just only want to know about it.
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, parents used to punish physically or scolding them in order to learn the way they behave is
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or not.
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, punishment is partially correct to help
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but it can make
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grew
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up with fear and control their considerable ability.
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,
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will follow as per their parents’ management because of fears, they are unable to consider themselves to know between
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right
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and wrong.
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, parents should let them
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do whatever they want even if they make wrong by monitoring them. After
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, they will realize the things which
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really
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or not by themselves and
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type of realizing can be prolonged and they will keep in their memories for whole life. To sum up, despite punishment is needed to help
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the distinction between true or false at an early age, I believe that
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is not the only method to support
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in learning and giving chances to them by deciding themselves is
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a useful method for them to learn the distinction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • moral development
  • positive reinforcement
  • natural consequences
  • constructive punishment
  • punitive measures
  • psychological effects
  • self-esteem
  • aggression
  • anxiety
  • time-outs
  • loss of privileges
  • logical consequences
  • discipline
  • affection
  • internalize
  • modeling moral behavior
  • collaborative activities
  • ethical dilemmas
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