Schools concentrate for too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.

School curriculums required

students

to

study

almost every

subjects

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despite the fact that the

students

will not be using the things they learn from most of these classes as they are not relevant to their interests. In my opinion, I totally agree that schools should not be focusing on following the traditional ways of teaching in which

students

have to

study

many

subjects

that are not going to help them prepare to meet the qualifications of the working world.

Firstly

, in the current school system,

students

do not get to have their own personalized courses and have to

study

all the

subjects

required by the administration of

education

.

This

system fails to provide

further

education

and

real world

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experience for those who are interested in a particular

field

as

students

are taught to be responsible for their well-rounded

study

and not only one particular subject.

As a result

of having

this

mindset, the young are all becoming generalists and the society is lack

of

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diversity and speciality. Despite the fact that grouping

students

and having them

study

the same thing is easier for people working in the

field

of

education

, it is important that adults start to recognize the importance of providing options and promoting diversity in kids'

education

.

In addition

, having the youth studying too many

subjects

could

caused

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them to feel lost and make it hard for them to find their passion. It is crucial that kids get to spend time on a subject that they are drawn to in order to know more about it and be able to decide whether or not they want to work in that

field

in the future.

On the other hand

, studying many classes at the same time could cause confusion and make it hard to focus on just one specific subject.

Thus

, schools should minimize the number of classes that a student has to attend and allow them to explore

further

in the

field

they are

facinated

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fascinated

by. In conclusion, it is clear that the traditional curriculum is no longer adequate for the modern world in which specialists are in high demand. There should be

changes

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in the school system in order to properly prepare

students

for adulthood.