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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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In recent years, more and more people tend to run their own business
instead
 of becoming a worker in an organisation. In my opinion,
this
 trend obviously has
their
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its
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 own benefits and
also
 some drawbacks. Why
many people choose
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do many people choose
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 to do
this
? It is because of the advantages it
bring
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brings
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 to those people. One reason I know is the amount of salary that the owner of a
company
 receives tends to
much
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 higher than
employer
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the employer
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’
one
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apply
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.
Therefore
, they can afford many things, travel to many places, experience many
excited
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 things to have a better quality of life. Another benefit of being self-employed is having a flexible work schedule so they can adjust their work time to spend more time with their family or friends. I suppose
this
 is the biggest advantage because the workers of some
company
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companies
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 can not have much time to do other things due to their fixed work schedule.
In contrast
, the disadvantage of being the leader of a
company
 can not be denied.
First
 of all, the challenges with which the leader
cope
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 are very tough. They must have enough money to hire employers, create or hire a good infrastructure to run a business. they must
also
 know how to control their employer and meet their requirement to have the highest productivity.
Secondly
, they may face up with many competitors to become successful. They must know the way to attract the consumer to support their
company
 while there are so many other companies doing the same business with them.
Also
 if they do not succeed after trying to run a
company
, they may have an enormous loan. In conclusion, self-employed contain many benefits and
also
 drawbacks but if you try hard to achieve
goal
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, the reward might be valuable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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