Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society, like scientists and teachers, are more successful.

People

hold different views about whether

money

or social contributions are most successful. I am of the opinion that community dedication is more convincing whereas

money

can be reasonable in some situations. There are a host of reasons why

people

believe that individuals who devote themselves to the nation are the most successful.

First

and foremost, I personally think

people

succeed when they have elements

such

as contributing and making a nation become wealthy.

Besides

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they certainly have to earn income legally.

For instance

, scientists, teachers, doctors, lawyers,.. all of them have experienced a long hard learning time of at least 4-5 years to dedicate to society. Thanks to scientists,they have made Covid 19 Vaccines and co-ordinate with doctors to heal many

people

around the world. Until now, many

people

have a two-spot vaccination and the pandemic has been under control so their service is admirable. For teachers, they have been teaching kids,teenagers or adults a new language or IELTS,TOEIC to become a good student,a translator, an interpreter or even a new teacher in the future. A

second

point is that there are many billionaires

also

worthy of contribution to the community.One good illustration of

this

is Bill Gate co-founder of Microsoft with Bill& Melinda Gates Foundation aim to enhance healthcare and reduce extreme poverty across the world and

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expand educational opportunities. The

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Vietnamese Billionaire Pham Nhat Vuong in Vietnam, founder and chairman of Vingroup.He has opened a hotspot Vinpearl land tourism, many luxury departments,a lot of supermarkets or created VinFast Cars, especially Landmark 81 skyscrapers,the highest building in Vietnam and the

second

in Northeast

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.Recently, his family has donated 2.287 billion for

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pandemic.

On the other hand

, it is often said that making a lot of

money

is successful.Some

people

might have

this

opinion because they think

money

will resolve all problems, purchase everything they want or have rights.

Therefore

, it is possible that they use

money

the wrong way. Nowadays, gambling evils, trading heroin and

money

laundering are more and more popular because they want to earn

money

easily and quickly and their standard of living is high and

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.

For example

, I have a cousin who is a big fan of

gamebling

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gambling

.He doesn’t go to work and earn

money

by play gambling.

Then

his family have to buy property to pay

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to him. In conclusion,

money

can’t completely buy time, health and love unless

people

use

money

as a useful tool to earn it and make property for the nation.

Hence

, when

people

contribute, help together to make a strong,wealthy civilization and create legal

money

.