many manufactured food and drink products contain high level off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the majority of the food companies use a high content of
sugar
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to their product
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, consumption of sugary foods and drinks to
people
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tend to increase and certain health issues might arise. It says that sugary
products
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will more expensive so consumption will be less. I totally disagree with
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statement because general
people
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will not be able to celebrate
occasions
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and it is not a good way to encourage
people
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to consume less
sugar
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.
Occasions
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are really important for every level and age of
people
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. And most of the time sugary
products
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are the main stuff to celebrate
occasions
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such
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as cake, chocolate, etc.
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, when sugary
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will be more expensive than low-income level
people
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will not be able to effort those
products
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and their
occasions
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will be ruined.
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, the cake is the main stuff to the celebrate birthday parties and most of the time parents do it for young kids when parents will not able to do
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it will be really bad for them to accept. I
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think that increasing sugary
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cost is really not a good way to encourage
people
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to consume less
sugar
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. Because still a lot of
people
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will able to consume
sugar
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and
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problem will not reduce. The best way to encourage
people
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is to be educated on
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particular issue, so they will know how harmful it is and
this
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idea will encourage
people
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to consume less
sugar
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.
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, in Bangladesh, most
people
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were throwing their household waste anywhere on the roadside, the government made a hard law but didn't work. But when the government is able to make them aware of able bad effects
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it suddenly stopped. In conclusion, there is no argument that sugary foods are bad for health but to increase sugary
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cost is not only a bad idea but
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it will affect general
people
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's important
Occasions
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sugar consumption
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • encourage
  • expensive
  • reduce
  • effectively
  • discourage
  • tight budget
  • purchasing
  • disproportionately
  • lower-income individuals
  • healthier food choices
  • demand
  • regardless
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