Some people believe that you should strictly control your children’s behaviour, while some others believe children should be free to choose their behaviour. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Feasts are prevalent among many nations the
world
over. It seems that many are interested in taking part in festivals regardless of their religion or culture. Somehow the public is merely interested in having fun and sharing their joy with others and doesn’t really want to perceive and appreciate the purpose behind Use synonyms
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people
are in a serious lack of time they might neglect the true meaning behind so many things and Use synonyms
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Therefore
, one considers joining a festival as a sanctuary away from all the hustle and bustle of living in today’s Linking Words
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and puts less importance on the meaning behind it. In fact, without having one’s basic needs addressed, there is little chance to enhance their religious or traditional literacy.
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, there is a festival called ‘fire’ which is held at the end of each solar year in Iran; its main purpose roots in ancient times when Linking Words
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