Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?

The major source of serious

illness

and

death

in the whole world nowadays is smoking.

Therefore

, in regard to public health,

ciggarettes

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cigarettes

and other

tobacco

products should be prohibited.I agree that

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smoking

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smocking

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smoking

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is a danger to human health and should be prohibited.

Firstly

,those people who smoke usually

dont

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don't

have the repercussion in mind towards their health

form

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from

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smoking habits and

thus

continue making a daily trend

however

lowering their body immune which they end up having serious

illness

and

death

.

In addition

,the

goverment

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government

has established

smocking

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zones which are

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underutilized

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under utilized

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underutilized

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although

not in all town centre

concequently

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consequently

putting

public

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the public

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at risk so the other alternative is prohibiting cigarettes and other

tobacco

products.

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,

a

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research done by the Nairobi university shows that 80% of lung cancer cases are caused by smoking.

Therefore

,it is imperative for the

goverment

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government

to put

strict

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the strict

a strict

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measure

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measures

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on

smocking

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smoking

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to reduce serious

illness

and

death

the

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community.

Secondly

,companies that produce

tobacco

should have

strict

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policy that

stand

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for the safety of the public since

this

company create employment

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, therefore,

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therefore

cannot be done away with but on alternative be supported.

Inaddition

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In addition

tobacco

product

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products

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should be

higly

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highly

taxed to reduce frequent intake by people as they will be expensive.

For example

in Rwanda,

tobacco

products are 70% taxed and since

then

Rwanda has

the

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lowest cases of lung cancer.For

this

reason

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the

goverment

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government

has a big role in

prevention

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the prevention

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of

illness

and

death

in the community To conclude,people have a big role to play in

prevetion

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prevention

preventing

of serious

illness

and

death

by stopping to

smocke

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smoke

while the

goverment

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government

follow

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adhererance

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adherence

to prohibited smocking