Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?

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in the whole world nowadays is smoking.

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, in regard to public health, cigarettes and other

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should be prohibited.I agree that smoking is a danger to human health and should be prohibited.

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,those people who smoke usually Do not have the repercussion in mind towards their health from smoking habits and

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continue making a daily trend

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lowering their body immune which they end up having serious

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.

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,the

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has established smoking zones which are underutilized

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not in all town

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consequently

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putting the public at risk

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other

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alternative is prohibiting cigarettes and other

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products

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Nairobi

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shows that 80% of lung cancer cases are caused by smoking.

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,it is imperative for the

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to put

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strict measures on smoking to reduce serious

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in the community.

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,companies that produce

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should have a strict policy that stands for the safety of the public since

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company create employment

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cannot be done away with but

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alternative be supported.

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tobacco

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products

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should be highly taxed to reduce frequent intake by people as they will be expensive.

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in Rwanda,

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are 70% taxed and since

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Rwanda has had the lowest cases of lung cancer.For

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has a big role in the prevention of

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and

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in the community

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,people have a big role to play in

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prevention of serious

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by stopping

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the

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