Some people believe that nowadays we have too much choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Lots of choices have
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human
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fast updating
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era, every field sector should
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immensely and get much more outdated
opportunity
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for the
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will truly prove
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the beginning,
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and most important point is to
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and development of every
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amount
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open
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for
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humankind
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human kind
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to put that effort
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each field simultaneously.
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, If we compare
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world with today's world
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are many
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changes
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in working and
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updating technology.
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,
people
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can easily get knowledge about their work very quickly due to fast networking and new smartphone.
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spent less time for searching
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information and they can not do many
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hard work
because they have easily
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any
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of
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books and articles on providing facilities
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internet
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. To Continue,
people
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also
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get
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a choice
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of clothes,
foods
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.
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, almost all range of
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brands are available on
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shoppes
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either on
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internet
.
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can enjoy every
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food items
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their native places and easily available.
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and you get
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this foods
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on each street.
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,
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can get
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jobs. Include,
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, many of working place put
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their
advertisements on social media, so,
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generation can get work through advertising very easily. Overall, choice
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put much more impact on
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life either to choose study field or working life. Choices get
people
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to think about their original skills in which they could make their carrier.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • decision fatigue
  • myriad
  • dissatisfaction
  • regret
  • paralysis of action
  • empowers
  • preferences
  • innovation
  • competitiveness
  • fosters
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