In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore, necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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is true. I reckon that it is a solution and I agree with

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. The majority of people are facing the impact of feeding on too much fast

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good point of the declaration is that the companies of

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may aware of the high tax and strict rules, so they may upgrade the quality concerned with health.

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is clearly more appropriate for health and fitness than the former. Some may

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hesitate to produce unhealthy fast

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because of the awareness of

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disadvantages

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. They might

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increase the price of their products to get a considerable profit since they have to pay higher

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to the government. The consumers will

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think carefully to buy convenient canned

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and others since they become a little pricey. It is obvious that fast

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is bought because of the cheap price tag and how it is easy to eat. After the overtaxing

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by the government, the customers may not buy

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as much as before the

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is considered to be a good outcome. If they know the reasons behind

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, they might be reminded about the drawbacks of those unhealthy ones because of the regulations and announcements of weighty taxation. To conclude, the production industries of fast

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may fix the quality of it. The buyers may

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reflect

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bad points of it and reduce eating it as much as they can. Because of these merits, I agree with

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