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Many elderly people are no long er looked after by their families but are put in care home or nursing home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

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Nowadays, there are many sons who prefer to send their own elderly
people
 to take
care
 in a nursing
home
. As a coin has two sides,
this
 new trend has both merit and demerits. Turning to the positive aspect, some ageing parents need to be more careful and
care
 about their health.
However
, many
people
 have
time
 to spend
time
 with their elder family because of their busy
time
 at work or travel.
As a result
, the older
people
 need more
care
, so find their demand is going to
care
home
 to take
care
 of them.
For instance
, because of a lot of
time
 wasted on work and travel between country a lot of elderly
people
 didn’t find somebody to
care
 for them,
for example
, in government in Egypt began to provide places to take
care
 of parents that there don’t have children can interest them. On the flip side, we need to feel and understand that the emotional attachment a person has with his close family member and their leave it to the nursing
home
. To be honest many emotional for that it very wondering bad because their want to spend more
time
 with their children and grandchildren at their own homes rather than a
care
home
. The feeling of loneliness, security and comfort will affect badly for their mental health. To conclude
,
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 must be understood that old age homes have become a part of social and community structure. The
care
 in a nursing
home
 or anything like that will be a good aspect in the part of the
time
, but we can accept that the situation in all cases.
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