While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain what happened - apologise for the accident - tell your friend what you plan to do about the bowl

Dear Bea, How are you,hope your vacation
doing
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well. I am very thankful to let me stay
to
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your
appartment
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apartment
for
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a
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the
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mean time
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meantime
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. It was a big help
while
I
am
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was
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searching
my
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for my
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new house and it
is
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was
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easy to pass by
to
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my
work place
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. I am writing
this
letter to
informed
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you regarding
to
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your expensive
bowl
.
i
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know that
bowl
has sentimental value
of
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for
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you and it was your
favorite
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bowl
,plus your
grandmother
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gift. To make my story short,I accidentally split on the floor
while
holding your
bowl
and luckily I cannot save that
bowl
and it is having a slight crack on the side. I sincerely
appoligise
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apologise
apologize
for my
action
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and for being clumsy.Now I do not know how to face
with
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you I
really
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timid that's why I
write
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and
informed
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informing
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you in advance. By the
way
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I still fixed the
bowl
and I kept
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it to
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to
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your display box,
although
you cannot use
this
at least we can keep it.Do not worry I already buy a new one for the
atlernative
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alternative
even
it
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if it
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was
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not
a
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similar and it is not
a
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as
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sentimental as the old one. Hoping
your
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forgiveness. And see you soon, I miss
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you.Enjoyed the single moment of your vacation. Regards, Shiela
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