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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise

I hope you are fine and enjoying your vacation in Singapore. Well, I wanted to tell you something important. While I was playing with your dog in the living room, unfortuantely, the decorative bowl on the coffee table sl
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise

I hope you had a blast on your vacation. I have seen your pictures on your Instagram profile, it seems like it was the best for you. I'm writing this letter to let you know about one very unfortunate incident.
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apo

I'm writting this letter to express about the accident last night which caused to your expensive bowl broken.
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apo

How are you? I hope that you enjoyed your vacation, I hope we can arrange some time together to tell me everything about it, especially the places you visited and the photos you took with the new professional camera. Als
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise fo

I hope you are doing well! I hope you are enjoying your vacation in Singapore. Actually, I want to tell you something important, I was playing with your dog in the living area and mistakenly, I hit the glass bowl kept at
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise fo

I hope this letter finds you well and in good health. The reason for writing this letter is to let you know that while you were on vacation when I stayed in your apartment, I accidentally dropped the pot which you had ke
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise fo

I am writing this letter to let you know about a mishappening that occurred during my stay at your apartment. Yesterday, while I was watching a movie and having snacks in one of your bowls, I heard the sound of tap water
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise fo

I am writing this letter to confess to you about the bowl, which was broken by me accidentally when I was there in your apartment. Actually, while cleaning your living room with the vacuum cleaner, without being aware th
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise fo

Hope you are enjoying your vacation. Convey my regards to your parents. I am writing this letter to apprise you that accidentally I dropped your expensive bowl and got broken.
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise fo

I hope you are keeping up well? Hope your holidays were a great refreshment to your soul, as you badly needed one! I must firstly say, I had a wonderful experience while staying with you at your apartment. Can't forget
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain what happened - apologise

Dear Bea, How are you,hope your vacation doing well. I am very thankful to let me stay to your apartment for a mean time. It was a big help while I am searching my new house and it is easy to pass by to my work place.
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain what happened - apologise

Dear Bea, How are you,hope your vacation doing well. I am very thankful to let me stay to your appartment for a mean time. It was a big help while I am searching my new house and it is easy to pass by to my work place
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain what happened - apologise fo

The pie charts compare the proportion of workers in three sectors, including manufacturing, sales, and services, in town A and town B in 1960 and 2010.
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain what happened - apologise fo

The given maps illustrate how a waterfront area in Darwin was developed between 2009 and 2014.
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain what happened - apologise fo

The pie charts compare the proportion of employees in three sectors in two different towns A and B in 1960 and 2010.
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain what happened - apologise fo

Hope your enjoying your vacation with your family and your in a good health as you receive this letter. I am writing to you because I wanted to tell you something.
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain what happened - apologise fo

How are you and how was your holiday? I hope you had an amazing time and came back fresh. Thanks for letting me stay at your place. I enjoyed playing Playstation games and had fun trying the skateboard.
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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise fo

How are you and how was you holiday? I hope you had an amazing vacation. Thanks for letting me stay over at your place while you were away. I enjoyed playing PS4 games and also had a great time swimming at the lap pool a
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