SOME SCHOOL LEAVERS TEND TO GO TRAVELLING OR WORK A PERIOD OF TIME BEFORE GOING TO UNIVERSITY. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, there are a number of

students

who graduate from high

school

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to take a gap before joining higher education. In my view,

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will bring both

positivies

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positives

positive

and drawbacks

effetcs

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effects

to

students

. On the

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hand, there are vast of benefits of travelling or working for

school

leavers before getting the

university

.

Firstly

, moving forward to travel or work will help

students

identify their major. Some pupils do not know

extactly

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exactly

which major they want to join or like in

college

or

university

.

Therefore

, they want to try in some workplaces to identify about major. For

instead

, some young

students

like

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both

marketing and

phamamcy

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pharmacy

, but they worry about which major will have a well paid after they graduate. After taking a year to

voluntering

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volunteering

for both majors, they feel that

phamacy

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pharmacy

bring a well

financail

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financial

and marketing help them more confidences.

Secondly

, some

students

want to be independent by paying all

school

fees

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without

the parent's

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. Those who work before studying in academic not only gain more

knowleges

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knowledge

but

also

have a certain amount of

money

to cover the

univeristy

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university

fees.

Therefore

, they will not pressure about

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when

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starting

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the

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college

or

uniersity

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university

.

Besides

, after a long high

school

journey, they need some moments to refresh their brain and gain new

knowlegdes

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knowledge

.

On the other hand

, taking the travelling or working before going to

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college

also

have some

disavantages

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disadvantages

. They will be distracted by

money

or working. After joining with travelling or working, they feel that spending

time

in

vollege

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college

or

university

is wasted

time

is

money

. While working brings for them more reality social skills which do not have at schools and more

money

, they can use

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money

to do whatever they want. The academic is not

only

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the only

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way to get

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success

and

these

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this

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is

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are

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not

guranted

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guaranteed

with any jobs after finishing

college

or

academic

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academics

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. Nowadays, the recruits company always seek for those who have

experiences

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experienced

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, if they spend all

time

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their time

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with study during the

college

time

, they will not have experiences. Which means they will become unemployees or struggle with looking

jobs

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for jobs

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. In conclusion, while taking a

taking a

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gap year to go other places or try on some jobs before taking the

university

will help

students

understanable

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understandable

about major, these make them feel boring if

continuning

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continuing

higher education.