During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. * remind him when and where you met * tell him what kind of job you are interested in * say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Mr James, I am Kim Hugh. We bumped in the reception area and had a chat in a cafe at the airport. I am writing
this
letter in reference to the possible job that we talked about recently and I have your biding card. Let me explain in more detail
first
as I mentioned to you before I am currently working in a cafe restaurant as a head barista and my contract will end at
this
end of the month. I am looking for a new job luckily that I have your card in my pocket I contacted you for the manager position that you offered to me. I am confident that
this
position
is suit
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me because of my determination
in
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works and the way to handle my people. I will commit myself and to
learn
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new skills on my own in order to succeed in
this
position. As we exchanged our personal contacts when we met would you kindly respond to me in one of my personal emails that I gave you. I await your favourable response. Yours sincerely, Kim
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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