The best way to deal with the rising problem of traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in the suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree?

No doubt, with the advent of new transportation services rise in
traffic
,problems are noted.Some say that one of the best ways to solve
this
issue is to encourage people to move from the countryside to big cities,
this
not only going to help them but
also
going to solve matters related to
traffic
and transportation. Well, I agree with
this
statement as it's not only going to aid our environment but
also
going to save a lot of energy, time and money as well.
To begin
with,a large number of people commute from suburbs to cities because of a number of reasons and a job is one of them.
Moreover
,
this
is a daily practice, some individuals travel in their cars, while others through public vehicles
such
as buses or subways.
This
is an issue of concern, which directly leads to problems like
traffic
congestion and pollution.
For example
, countries like China, India are currently dealing with problems related to the environment and heavy
traffic
. Moving from suburbs to cities not only going to solve
this
situation but
also
going to aid air pollution which is directly caused by
traffic
jams on road. Moving
further
, people who live
on
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countryside
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the countryside
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has to take multiple buses or trains to reach their destination, with
this
they not only have to pay double but
their
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apply
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they
also
waste their
valubale
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valuable
time and
engry
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angry
while
traveling
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back and forth.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban sprawl
  • public transport infrastructure
  • commutes
  • residential density
  • ecological footprint
  • overcrowding
  • urban planning
  • car-sharing
  • traffic management
  • rural preservation
  • transportation policies
  • electric vehicles
  • sustainable living
  • incentivize
  • telecommuting
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