Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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safety. A recent study has been conducted throughout fifty thousand participants across all globe with a range of young adults to elderly starting from Use synonyms
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as obsessive and anxiety disorder, driving without possessing a valid license, reckless driving Linking Words
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as rushing without checking blind spots. In my opinion, I disagree that the minimum legal Linking Words
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safety unless with the stated conditions above. Use synonyms
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However
, it is not necessary to increase the legal Linking Words
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for driving cars and motorbikes unless they prefer to spend extra cash for obtaining licenses for trucks, buses licenses for a full-time job. In conclusion, driving any vehicles on Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite