Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

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Dear Aseem, I am so glad that you invited me to visit you in Dubai, UAE.

However

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, I have never been there so would like to know a couple of things about your home country. When I was packing my

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clothes

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cloths

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, my mom told me that UAE has some

do's

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and

dont's

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donts

dont

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for certain attires. So can you please tell me what kind of dresses I can bring and do I need to bring a scarf to cover my head? I will be there for a week so if you can brief me about random

itenerary

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itinerary

where and what type of activities we are going to do and since I am a pure

vegeterian

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vegetarian

would I be able to get food without meat in it so

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I can pack my

stuffs

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stuff

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, I bought a

couple

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wrist watch

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for your parents but not sure about your sibling, so do you mind tell me about her likes and dislikes and will buy as per her choice. I am super excited about

this

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trip and look forward to meeting you soon. Bye.

Brijal

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Bridal

Brinjal

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

182 words

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