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Topic: Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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In recent times,
daily
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 routine of individuals has become quite tedious and busy that they tend to be more occupied than how it used to be in the earlier generation.
Initially
, only men used to
work
 and earn money for the family but nowadays even women
in equality
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inequality
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 with men earn as well. The timings of the workplace have become so hectic that it makes it impossible to devote
time
 in preparing
home cooked
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home-cooked
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food
 or concentrating on children and so on and so forth.
This
 essay depicts that
due to
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the schedule that folks or married couples tend to follow in recent
scenario
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 initiates them to purchase eatables from outside rather than preparing
food
 at
home
. Recently, folks are engrossed in their
work
 quite badly that they don't have a specific
time
 to return back
home
.
Also
, they hardly get any
time
 for themselves or for their family.
Hence
, to save
time
, they purchase
food
 or a snack from outside, so they don't have to get back
home
 after the
strenous
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strenuous
work
 and
then
 prepare
food
 for the family. In
this
 way, they get to spend the lost
time
 with the family and they don't sleep empty stomach as well. It is quite obvious that it makes it an easier solution for most of them.
In addition
, I would like to opine that it might be impossible for some to prepare
home cooked
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food
 on a daily basis considering the tedious
work
 schedule but the downfall of
this
 is that eating outside eatables daily might
detoriate
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deteriorate
 one's health as well children's.
Also
, the ingredients or the oil used while preparing
those
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food
 might hamper our routine lifestyle and it is quite possible that eating unhealthy
food
 might make them ill. In conclusion, I would
further
 state that eating outside
food
 on a daily basis would be harmful in a long run but purchasing it rarely would do no harm for anyone. So it's preferable to eat
home cooked
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food
 rather than eating it daily from outside. Health is wealth.
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