Working long hours causes a great deal of stress and can be very bad for the health. The government must find a way to reduce this type of stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everybody knows that

stress

is bad for

workers

' health. But whose fault is that? It is my submission and that it is the government role to intervene through legislation and support

network

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to tackle

this

issue.

Stress

in the workplace comes from long working

hours

. In modern societies,

workers

are well-connected. In some

work

culture

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,

workers

are expected to be reachable even outside of their contractual working

hours

. Competition among employees in the workplace doesn't help. As an employee, it is natural to want to advance in his career.It means he must

work

hard at his job, sometimes going above and beyond his normal call of duty.All of

this

produces

stress

.

Stress

also

comes from having a poor boss. Unfair treatment at

work

is one of the

reason

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many

workers

quit as they cannot cope with the

stress

.

Stress

affects many aspects of a

persons

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health, both physically and psychologically. The negative effects of

stress

is

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well known.A person may lose concentration at

work

, Miss handle his tasks. He may be irritable and poison the atmosphere at

work

. The government has a role to play in promoting healthy habits.In many countries in Europe, by law,

workers

must not

work

for more than a certain number of

hours

each week.

Such

policies set a framework to reduce, avoid long working

hours

, thereby protecting

workers

or well-being in general, and

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reduce

stress related

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illnesses. It has been observed that

stress

level is higher in corporate Asia.In highly competitive economies like Hong Kong, Singapore, Japan and South Korea,

workers

routinely

work

overtime. Chronic overwork is a major cause of

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stress

. The situation and ends up costing the company and the economy in terms of

workers

health and long-term medical treatment for

stress

. It is believed that if the government of these Asian countries follow the footsteps of their European counterparts and put

it

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into law labour policies and at looking after

work

as well-being, there will be an overall reduction in

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illnesses and absenteeism, with a net positive effect on the economy.