A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job

Dear Joe, How are you? Hope you are in good health as soon you receive my letter. I have
a good news
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for you since I received your letter that you are looking for
job
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. Actually, one of our
branch
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will open two months from now and I think you will be interested in applying.
To begin
with, my manager posted
last
night about the opening of our branch in town
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December and they started to look for applicants. They are looking for
supervisor
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in
information
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technologist department, that I know
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familiar with.
In addition
to that, your task includes
first
, you will be checking and
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all the
employer
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under your
deparment
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department
, another is you will
also
install the
softwares
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software
and update the system that the company will use since it is newly open.
Lastly
, you will guide the trainees, since they will be open for
the
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on-the-job training for different schools.
Furthermore
, I am confident that you are suitable for the job since I know that your major
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computer science,
also
during our class while we are studying, I saw your leadership skills and how you handle your subordinates which I know
it
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will be perfect for the job. Since I know how you maintain your built and exercise is very important to you, the working hours will start at 10 am,
thus
I remember your a morning person, you can do all the fitness exercise in the morning before going to work. If you are interested in the vacancy, you can just send your
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curriculum
vitae
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this
email [email protected]. Make your resume is updated with your recent photo.
However
, once they selected you, you need to report here for the formal interview which will happen in the main office, where I am working. Do not worry and I will make sure to give a good name to my boss. If you still have
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do not hesitate to email me back. Hope to see you here soon. Wishing you
goodluck
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good luck
Goodluck
. Yours truly, Candace
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reputation
  • industry
  • duties and responsibilities
  • typical day
  • skills and experiences
  • job requirements
  • company culture
  • personality
  • work ethic
  • application process
  • job listing
  • submit an application
  • documents required
  • tailored resume
  • cover letter
  • relevant experiences
  • reviewing documents
  • practicing for interviews
  • promptly
  • deadlines
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