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You ware working for a Company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manger. In your letter * explain why you want to take time off work * give details of the amount of time you need * suggest how your work could be covered while you are away You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,

#ware #company #time #work #manager #manger #amount #addresses
Dear Mr Peterson, I am writing
this
 letter to ask you about my work off because I am having
a
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back pain and I will go for a
check up
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 in the hospital. Let me explain my situation in more detail
firstly
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, for the past few days I am experiencing backache in my upper body which radiates to my nerves.
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, sometimes I am not able to feel and move my hands because of the numbness. I am humbly requesting in your office to give me an off from work for 3 days in order for me to get a check-up of my current situation. I already asked Arlene to cover me for 3 days while I am away and endorsed some important documents that you needed for
next
 week. Would you kindly let me know as soon as possible through my emails so that I can book an appointment with my doctor? I await your favourable response. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Emily
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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