Some people believe that students should take a gap year after finishing school and work or travel during this period. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

There has been growing a

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oncern nowadays for

students

in the decision whether or not they take a

year

off and work or travel when they graduate from high school.

Although

taking a gap

year

might take some risks in wasting time, it is definitely the best way for

students

to get experiences and facilitate their knowledge. In the

first

place,

students

can get significant benefits when pursuing their dream jobs.

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great time for those who desire to get rid of theoretical understanding;

in other words

, they can work in a practical working environment when applying for a job. After a

year

of working,

students

can actually bridge the gap between what has been learnt and what is the real demand in the workplace. They are mature and experienced enough to make up their mind of following the career they have chosen.

As a result

, the chance of giving up the job stands no chance to happen later.

Secondly

, it is necessary for

students

to travel before studying i

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university. Travelling to other countries will provide

students

with a range of cultural diversity, which leads to a myriad of advantages

such

as being outgoing and open-minded as well as being more informed.

This

experience is so valuable that they cannot find i

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class time.

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improved themselves with a lot of new skills as communication skills and time-management skills.

As a result

, they will be more sociable and work more effectively in their later jobs. In conclusion, taking a gap

year

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students

as it is advantageous and beneficial.

Students

should consider

this

choice after finishing high school.