Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It

is widely know

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that doing a

community

work

help to develop various skills

such

as social skill, communication skill, and responsibility as well as it

contribute

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excellent effect on society.

Therefore

, some people consider that adolescents should engage

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works during their leisure time. In my opinion, I agree with

this

statement since

this

activity is beneficial to them.

To begin

with, knowledge learning from classrooms at school is not sufficient, so participating in public

work

can complete the missing part.

First

of all, taking part in

community

works is able to strengthen essential skills;

for instance

, when students

work

in the hospital to take care of elderly people, they can develop communication

skill

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skills

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and

responsibility

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responsibilities

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.

Moreover

, teenagers have a chance to do immense social services that correspond to their

particularly

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interest

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interests

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. They may discover the profession that suitable them the most from doing

community

services.

For example

, adolescent partaking in teaching younger children at different school might be a teacher in the future.

Nevertheless

, doing a public service can generate

favorable

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result

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results

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only if the pupils are willing to participate. Many schools have a regulation that

force

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their students to join

this

activity during summer or school break. If children are compelled to do

this

work

,

as a result

, they will oppose and

miserable

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.

Thus

,

instead

of having a rule, schools should encourage their pupils and provide different

type

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types

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of social services for the children to select according to their

interest

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interests

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. To summarize,

the

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community

works are essential for teenagers to gain extensive experience and improve their skills;

however

, they must attend voluntarily not

by

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compelling.