Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
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the problem
vehicles
on road and environmental impurity is rise
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examples
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with, in this
modern era people prefer to use cars, bikes, buses and other vehicles
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some environmental problems and traffic jams, but Change the verb form
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price rate of petrol is not a solid Correct article usage
a higher
solution
.firstly
, in this
modernity using vehicles
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individuals
this
no one will give a second
thought about the price of petrol becuase
it not going to impact their weekly or monthly wages. Correct your spelling
because
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a person
earn
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the amount
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diesel
deisel
or petrol increased by $10, still does not have any effect. Change preposition
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secondly
,vehicles
are not the main reason for contamination,there are many other things which also
affect atmosphere
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the atmosphere
such
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or on the edge of roads and many more. Add an article
the river
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hence
, changes in payment
of fossil fuels is not a perfect way.
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the payment
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the biosphere
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the authority
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government
governments
goevrnment
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this
can be started through the schools as pupil
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this
it will quite beneficial. apart from this
,it is also
our duty to look after our planet because we survive here and should not play with natural things.last
but not least, we should save our flora and fauna because these are
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also exist
also
exist at
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on
this
earth and the reason of
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for
this
extinction is either the cutting of trees and using mobile phones and another
handheld gadgets. Correct quantifier usage
other
hence
, nothing is impossible as word
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", so we should think differently to save our earth.
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up
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,up
problem
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problem
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the solution
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government
governement
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also
do something for
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about
this
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