Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

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A group of lawyers gave their opinion regarding the criminal case

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which suggest hiding their previous criminal record as

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law would save them from any harsh penalty. In my opinion, I agree with the fact that

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must make some amendments to these

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, all the information about the person who has committed the

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before must be presented,

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if not it will be a huge relief for them as they will be saved from taking any strict action against them by the

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, if a person has done some serious crimes in the past and his record is not shown before the judiciary they would be on cloud nine as they might get bail without any strong evidence against them. Despite that

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must think about those

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which they have initiated at

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, against those which has

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been done would not get justice and inevitably their trust on the

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and about democracy would be broken just because of those

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to that, there would

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be no need for lawyers to push the judiciary to take strict decisions about the case and against the accused. By and large, I agree with the given statement. Especially, in those countries where

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rates have been hit the

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it might just cause havoc there, so these

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are against the innocent people on whom the

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was committed. To conclude, I must say without any

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delay

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must take these

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back, before it's too late.

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, Our society would

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not remain the same if the

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does not repeal these

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, we are going to see an increase in

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rates too.

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