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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

#people #government #money #arts
Home: Because, children spend much more time at their homes and tend to follow the habits of their parents, the home is the best place to teach
this
 important value. School: It is well established that children listen to their teachers more than the parents, and at school they
also
 learn by observing the behaviour of their peers. Schools provide the perfect atmosphere for learning because of a formal and enabling environment. Influence: 1) Leads people to do a bunch of unnecessary purchase and over expenditure. 2) Advertisements are usually misleading(because of their description, consumers can be misleaded by advertisement) There are some methods that can protect consumers: 1) The government is ought to restraint misleading advertisements. 2) Parents should protect their children from avoiding too much exposure to advertising.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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