A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply
Dear Sasha,
Hope
your
Correct pronoun usage
you
in
a good health as soon as you receive Add a missing verb
are in
this
letter. I received your letter last
week and you are interested to study in
the university I went Change preposition
at
last
year. I think you will Change preposition
to last
loving
it there.
Change the form of the verb
love
To begin
with, if you will taking the same course I studied better to be prepared. First
, you need to be familiar with buildings in
the campus, Change preposition
on
thus
the subjects you will undergo is located in different areas. Another, you must find an apartment near the university because most of your majors are mornings. Lastly
, the course is quite expensive, but it will be worth it once you finished the course.
Furthermore
, the university is huge with complete facilities, there is club
for management, you better join that for you to access there own library which you will Add an article
a club
the club
be surprise
because it all contains what you need. Change the verb form
be surprised
Also
, every after the
semester they are selecting top Correct article usage
apply
student
to be their scholars which covers every expences. Fix the agreement mistake
students
In addition
, if you can maintain that grades, after graduation they will offer you a job in a pretigious
Correct your spelling
prestigious
companies
.
If you are interested, you can come over and I will help you and tour you since I am here nearby, just do not forget your diploma, your transcript of records, plus Fix the agreement mistake
company
recent
2×2 photo for the registration.
I will wait for Correct article usage
a recent
you're
decision, just give me a message when you are coming Replace the word
your
in
town.
Regards,
VivienChange preposition
to
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite