Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is apparent that being famous persons

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as celebrities and superstars will get a lot of attention from everyone. Some

people

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believe that all popular

people

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have to sacrifice their private life as their duty is being a public person, and they have to accept these conditions without any complaints, whereas, my opinion contradicts

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viewpoint. In the following paragraphs, the reason supporting my idea will be discussed in detail.

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, celebrities are

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human so they should have quality time to rest and spend with their family. Being spotlighted all the time, even they are travelling with family on holidays, can make them stressed and anxious.

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, Lisa, a member of the famous Korean girl group, was followed by a vast majority of

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, while she was shopping with her Thai friend at the shopping mall on her rest day.

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, she could not continue shopping anymore and needed to go back home immediately. For

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reason,

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should understand the feeling of superstars, and respect their privacy.

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, some of the fans act as a stoker to follow superstars everywhere, even they are at their house.

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can make them scared of being intruded.

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, Robert Pattison revealed that when he was the actor in the Vampire Twilight saga, his reputation was at its peak. His house was always surrounded by an enormous number of

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every day and some of them tried to invade his house without a permit.

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can lead to being uncomfortable as he was being spotlighted 24/7. In conclusion,

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it is normal to get attention for being the celebrities, I strongly disagree with

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issue, and I think that they are

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human, which should receive the eligibility to have a rest day to spend quality time with their family and friend, and being intruded can lead them to be unpleasant and stressed.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Public spotlight
Media intrusion
Social contract
Paparazzi
Ethical limits
Mental health
Privacy rights
Public persona
Harassment
Media scrutiny

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