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Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced.

#missions #space #earth #demand #attention
It has been over a decade since the two humans had stepped down to the moon and after
that is
 the history of
space
 industries.
Space
missions
 have become one of the important things that shall be done for the progress of humanity.
However
, it is undeniable that in the present day, there
also
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 have a
problem
 that needs to be fixed in the world but
space
missions
 still need to be one of the things that we cannot take our eyes off.
To begin
 with, I disagree with the statement above due to the following reason.
Firstly
, the
space
missions
 already have been planned for years, and if the plan has been cancelled, it will cause problems in the industry by having late progress and all the schedules will delay.
Secondly
, the
space
 industries already have an investment in the project that cannot be ignored.
Otherwise
, it will be a waste of money.
Lastly
,
space
missions
 are very important for humans in the future more than solving problems on the earth. Perhaps the best example is if there is a serious
problem
 on the earth that will make
human
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 cannot live on the earth, we can just move out to
others
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 planets that have been explored before.
Moreover
, I do believe that we can separate the organization to take control
the
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missions
 and the
problem
. So, it
not
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 necessary to let anything between the
missions
 and the
problem
 off. In summary, I cannot entirely agree with the statement due to the reasons and examples in the former and latter paragraphs.
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