More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening food will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, health has been becoming a top priority in many countries and obesity

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major

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concern due to the lifestyle led by individuals. I completely disagree with

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notion saying that increasing the cost of

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junk

food

is the solution to

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issue. As there are other options

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as creating awareness in the public would be a more effective measure. Being

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overweight has always been a major concern, especially in

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developed countries, and it has been seen that

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issue and

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fast

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food

could be more common in the elite society.

Therefore

, raising the price may not have any impact on these people. In the contrast,

this

change might have an effect on the revenue of the

food

agency.

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, in the US there is a maximum proportion of obese people in the upper class, and

although

the price of

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is not nominal, the graph has always been following an upward trend.

However

, there are other and easier measures that could be adopted by the government and school authorities. the

first

initiative that should be taken is educating the students. If

this

awareness is already created in our future

genration

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generations

,

then

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change as it would become their

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habit

, and

this

can only be done with the help of school authorities by organising boot camps and giving them the opportunities to participate in the sports. Another step can be taken by

government

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for the public by arranging campaigns for educating

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effects of obesity and free

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. In conclusion, I believe,

instead

of concentrating on the prices of fast

food

, the more focus should be on educating

public

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about the adverse effects of being an

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overweight

and

this

can be done with the help of government.