Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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travel

has been increasingly significant in a

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and dynamic society. The question here is whether the development of

travel

by planes solely brings advantages to the most fortunate

people

and with the exception

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the unfortunate ones.

However

, I state my view that

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both

kind

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of these

people

also

receive the benefits from

this

means of transportation. On the one hand, there is a number of factors explaining why the poor cannot gain the merits of

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the airplane

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.

Firstly

, the lack of airport systems might contribute to

this

perception.

For example

, a recent survey has shown that almost

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countries are not able to allocate their money for constructing infrastructure where an aircraft can land due to the shortage of national budget, which causes

people

less access to

this

transportation.

Furthermore

, plane tickets are quite costly, exceeding the ability

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the poorer

afford

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for

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it

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.

Therefore

, these

people

could not be beneficial to

travel

by planes.

On the other hand

, it is believed that both the poor and rich may enjoy the merits

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by air

travel

. On the individual level,

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air transport plays an essential role

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the status and wealth of affluent

people

. On the macro level, the more the governments prioritize the financial support for the air transport industry, the more the airline companies will provide discounts or less expensive options, which opens the door for ordinary

people

can stretch to

this

transportation. In conclusion, not only do

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by

planes

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spends for the rich, but

also

the ordinary

people

can pay it off sometimes. As a consequence,

this

can lead to equality for using transportations among levels, and result in the demonstration of the affordability of normal

people

for

travel

.